UVU Writing
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Lightning Writing
October 3rd, 2008 by BrianMayberry in Assignments ||

The dark damp hallway smelt like death. Nobody dare enter it alone for fear of never returning.

But Jim was a brave soul who wanted to prove himself to his love, Bertha. Only Jim didn’t know what lurked

Ahead of him, fear gripped him tight as he took the first few steps looking back at Bertha, he waved.

He turned back quickly to hide the fear in his eyes as he continued down the neverending tunnel to hell!

But it turned out to Jim’s suprise that hell was actually quite cozy. So cozy in fact that he called through the tunnel for Bertha. “Hey Bertha! Roll that lard body of yours on down

this place is Rockin.” Bertha came flying down to Jim. “Hey Jim this place is

GREAT!” It turns out that the hallway was just a cover for an underground club that only a few people knew about. Jim also realized that the reason “no one ever returned” was that there was an exit back to the street. Jim was suprised to live next to such a place for years and never known.

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Comment by Megan
2008-10-05 16:35:52

John ran down the street, people were everywhere. Panic had set in, “How much time do we have” John yelled. But all he heard was the wailing of the little children. The end had come – the best donut shop in the world had gone out of business. This didn’t stop people from buying from the shop across the street, but everyone knew it was the shops fault that their were no longer any rainbow sprinkled white frosting donuts. It was all because of the loss of dough to make donuts with. That shop something had to be done, without the rainbow sprinkled donuts, this town would never be the same. John decided to take matters into his own hands, he’d open up his own donut shop and sell the favorite rainbow sprinkled donuts. He’d be rich, he’d be a hero, everyones new favorite guy in town. Things were starting to look up for John, maybe this morning wasn’t so bad after all, John thought!

 
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