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		<title>By: jpmurri</title>
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		<dc:creator>jpmurri</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2009 03:16:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My biggest problem i have is i always use different tenses throughout a paper.  So i have to focus on that more.</description>
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<p>My biggest problem i have is i always use different tenses throughout a paper.  So i have to focus on that more.
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		<title>By: Garrett</title>
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		<dc:creator>Garrett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 23:08:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good correction.

But now you have passive voice. Is that OK?</description>
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<p>Good correction.</p>
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<p>But now you have passive voice. Is that OK?
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		<title>By: Garrett</title>
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		<dc:creator>Garrett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 23:07:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s why I said to &quot;review&quot; it  :grin:</description>
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<p>That&#8217;s why I said to &#8220;review&#8221; it  <img src='http://uvu2020.garrettwinn.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':grin:' class='wp-smiley' />
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		<title>By: Garrett</title>
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		<dc:creator>Garrett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 23:06:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You could also say &quot;Whom did you send the letter to?&quot; Although, some English teachers &lt;i&gt;think&lt;/i&gt; this is poor grammar.

In actually, it is perfectly fine in English, but poor in Latin.</description>
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<p>You could also say &#8220;Whom did you send the letter to?&#8221; Although, some English teachers <i>think</i> this is poor grammar.</p>
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<p>In actually, it is perfectly fine in English, but poor in Latin.
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		<title>By: lorimiller</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 22:00:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The biggest grammar error we make in my family is using learned instead of taught. That&#039;s how my grandma talked and we all do just to make a joke of it. Indstead of saying  I taught her a lesson we say I learned her a lesson. Odd I know</description>
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<p>The biggest grammar error we make in my family is using learned instead of taught. That&#8217;s how my grandma talked and we all do just to make a joke of it. Indstead of saying  I taught her a lesson we say I learned her a lesson. Odd I know
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		<title>By: mikeclove</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 21:56:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The dangling participle is one grammatical mistake I&#039;m sure I make all the time. 

Incorrect example:  &quot;Featuring high quality tunes, we highly recommend this album.&quot;

What has high quality tunes?  &quot;We&quot; or the album?

Modifying phrases put at the beginning of a sentance need to be immediately followed by the object they are modifying (i.e. the oranges, not me).

Correct Example:  &quot;Featuring high quality tunes, this album comes highly recommended by us.&quot;</description>
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<p>The dangling participle is one grammatical mistake I&#8217;m sure I make all the time. </p>
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<p>Incorrect example:  &#8220;Featuring high quality tunes, we highly recommend this album.&#8221;</p>
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<p>What has high quality tunes?  &#8220;We&#8221; or the album?</p>
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<p>Modifying phrases put at the beginning of a sentance need to be immediately followed by the object they are modifying (i.e. the oranges, not me).</p>
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<p>Correct Example:  &#8220;Featuring high quality tunes, this album comes highly recommended by us.&#8221;
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		<title>By: Henrik</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 21:48:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The reading was way too long to grip my attention. I just looked over all the pages. The first part talks about equality in every aspect of your paper. The second part informs on the structure of sentences and what each part of a sentence is.

One of the biggest mistakes that I see involves their, there, and they’re. I was helping a college classmate revise her paper and she kept saying, &quot;There main purpose was...&quot; It’s sad how common this occurs.</description>
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<p>The reading was way too long to grip my attention. I just looked over all the pages. The first part talks about equality in every aspect of your paper. The second part informs on the structure of sentences and what each part of a sentence is.</p>
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<p>One of the biggest mistakes that I see involves their, there, and they’re. I was helping a college classmate revise her paper and she kept saying, &#8220;There main purpose was&#8230;&#8221; It’s sad how common this occurs.
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		<title>By: kevin.bell13</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 20:07:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One of the mistakes that I make is deciding between who and whom.  In my grammer book it says that who is the subject pronoun and whom is the object pronoun.  A pronoun takes place of a noun.  Subject pronouns are used when the pronoun is the subject of the sentence and object pronouns are used everywhere else. 

Incorrect example:
Who did you send the letter to?

Correct example:
To whom did you send the letter?

Remember that subject pronouns are words like I, he, she, we, etc and object pronouns are words like me, us, him, her, etc.

Who=subject
Whom=object</description>
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<p>One of the mistakes that I make is deciding between who and whom.  In my grammer book it says that who is the subject pronoun and whom is the object pronoun.  A pronoun takes place of a noun.  Subject pronouns are used when the pronoun is the subject of the sentence and object pronouns are used everywhere else. </p>
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<p>Incorrect example:<br />
Who did you send the letter to?</p>
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<p>Correct example:<br />
To whom did you send the letter?</p>
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<p>Remember that subject pronouns are words like I, he, she, we, etc and object pronouns are words like me, us, him, her, etc.</p>
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<p>Who=subject<br />
Whom=object
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		<title>By: Brian</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 18:56:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The best example I have of funny grammar is not from a written text. A guy I work with always uses the word was, in place of were. For example we was at the grocery store, or we was watching nascar. I never correct him, I just think its funny.</description>
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<p>The best example I have of funny grammar is not from a written text. A guy I work with always uses the word was, in place of were. For example we was at the grocery store, or we was watching nascar. I never correct him, I just think its funny.
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