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		<title>By: jpmurri</title>
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		<dc:creator>jpmurri</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jun 2009 23:36:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like the apple and rhubarb pie, ha.</description>
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<p>I like the apple and rhubarb pie, ha.
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		<title>By: jpmurri</title>
		<link>http://uvu2020.garrettwinn.com/20090603/team-write-from-june-2nd/comment-page-1/#comment-274</link>
		<dc:creator>jpmurri</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jun 2009 23:35:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mr Earthworm finally excaped the horrible fisherman.  The fishman had been trying to catch Mr. Earth worm for hours now..But he hid where no one could see him.  The fisherman had tried to catch Mr Earthworm before, but he was a slippery worm.  Just when Mr. Earthworm thought he had completly got away the earth..began to shake and a great crevace formed in the bottom of the lake taking with it all the water.  The Fisherman sat there in his little boat helpless in the large crater.  Mr. Earthworm jumped into the crack and fell for the boat..The fisherman and the earthworm worked together to save eachother.  The finally found out that they loved each other....</description>
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<p>Mr Earthworm finally excaped the horrible fisherman.  The fishman had been trying to catch Mr. Earth worm for hours now..But he hid where no one could see him.  The fisherman had tried to catch Mr Earthworm before, but he was a slippery worm.  Just when Mr. Earthworm thought he had completly got away the earth..began to shake and a great crevace formed in the bottom of the lake taking with it all the water.  The Fisherman sat there in his little boat helpless in the large crater.  Mr. Earthworm jumped into the crack and fell for the boat..The fisherman and the earthworm worked together to save eachother.  The finally found out that they loved each other&#8230;.
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		<title>By: Barry2010</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barry2010</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jun 2009 22:27:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice story, very detailed and describtive.</description>
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<p>Nice story, very detailed and describtive.
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		<title>By: Barry2010</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barry2010</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jun 2009 22:23:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This story reminds me of the movie Billy Madison. The field trip in that movie ended okay for the boy that peed his pants. But same concept, kids can be hard on each other without knowing the reason why someone is the way they are.</description>
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<p>This story reminds me of the movie Billy Madison. The field trip in that movie ended okay for the boy that peed his pants. But same concept, kids can be hard on each other without knowing the reason why someone is the way they are.
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		<title>By: Barry2010</title>
		<link>http://uvu2020.garrettwinn.com/20090603/team-write-from-june-2nd/comment-page-1/#comment-267</link>
		<dc:creator>Barry2010</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jun 2009 22:19:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This story cracks me up. It sounds like this is a small town and the kids get bored and try new things. I can honestly say that dog stew never entered my mind.</description>
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<p>This story cracks me up. It sounds like this is a small town and the kids get bored and try new things. I can honestly say that dog stew never entered my mind.
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		<title>By: Barry2010</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barry2010</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jun 2009 22:12:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Here is the group writing assignment.
Johnny lived on a farm in rural Kansas. He was a lonely boy with not many friends. People were scared of Johnny&#039;s dog Butch, because Butch liked to eat people, only bad ones of course. Johnny tried selling his dog to a cousin in Nebraska. But His dog bit everyone there because he hated cornhuskers. So Johnny decided to keep the dog in his basement. At least for the time being. What was he going to do withe the dog? He couldn&#039;t keep him down their. Johnny went to feed Butch one day and noticed a broken window and no Butch. He must have escaped in the night. All of a sudden he heard sirans outside. The ambulence....</description>
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<p>Here is the group writing assignment.<br />
Johnny lived on a farm in rural Kansas. He was a lonely boy with not many friends. People were scared of Johnny&#8217;s dog Butch, because Butch liked to eat people, only bad ones of course. Johnny tried selling his dog to a cousin in Nebraska. But His dog bit everyone there because he hated cornhuskers. So Johnny decided to keep the dog in his basement. At least for the time being. What was he going to do withe the dog? He couldn&#8217;t keep him down their. Johnny went to feed Butch one day and noticed a broken window and no Butch. He must have escaped in the night. All of a sudden he heard sirans outside. The ambulence&#8230;.
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		<title>By: James Gaul</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Gaul</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Jun 2009 15:05:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>spooky. :  :evil:</description>
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<p>spooky. :  <img src='http://uvu2020.garrettwinn.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_evil.gif' alt=':evil:' class='wp-smiley' />
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		<title>By: Erin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Erin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Jun 2009 22:56:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>WHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Jim! You are too much! I love this story! It makes my heart want to travel all over the world.</description>
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<p>WHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Jim! You are too much! I love this story! It makes my heart want to travel all over the world.
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		<title>By: Erin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Erin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Jun 2009 22:53:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It had begun the mindless chatter that signaled the beginning. My mind raced as the music of the power that would move me along rang out. I entered out onto the stage. The sound of the drums was pounding in my ears, in tune with my heart. It was the opening night of Tarzan and here I was Jane. The lead role was waiting for me to act my heart out. I started out onto the stage for my opening scene. All of a sudden I freeze in total terror. No one had told me that I would be acting on stage with live gorillas! I had never seen one except in the zoo. What was I to do? At that moment I decided that there were two ways this could go. Either I would “break a leg” or I would fall flat on my face. Whichever happened this was going to hurt. And then all my fear faded away and I was face to face with the most beautiful man any woman had ever laid eyes on. Tommy Pierce!</description>
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<p>It had begun the mindless chatter that signaled the beginning. My mind raced as the music of the power that would move me along rang out. I entered out onto the stage. The sound of the drums was pounding in my ears, in tune with my heart. It was the opening night of Tarzan and here I was Jane. The lead role was waiting for me to act my heart out. I started out onto the stage for my opening scene. All of a sudden I freeze in total terror. No one had told me that I would be acting on stage with live gorillas! I had never seen one except in the zoo. What was I to do? At that moment I decided that there were two ways this could go. Either I would “break a leg” or I would fall flat on my face. Whichever happened this was going to hurt. And then all my fear faded away and I was face to face with the most beautiful man any woman had ever laid eyes on. Tommy Pierce!
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		<title>By: amelia</title>
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		<dc:creator>amelia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Jun 2009 15:20:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It was dark outside. The sky was covered by an envelope of clouds. Kaily was supposed to go on a horseback ride with Nancy, but Nancy was nowhere to be found. Tonight was the anniversary of the tower (?) on Garfield Street. Kaily suspected that Nancy had ditched her for dinner with Chris. So, Kaily decided to go to the cemetary by herself. It seemed like a safer place then Garfield Street tonight. On her way to the cemetary she encountered an old man who asked her riddle after riddle before she could get inside the cemetary. Oddly, she did not question the old man&#039;s presence, but she answered every question and soon found herself walking into the cemetary. Once inside she saw Nancy scared as a...That&#039;s as far as we got!</description>
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<p>It was dark outside. The sky was covered by an envelope of clouds. Kaily was supposed to go on a horseback ride with Nancy, but Nancy was nowhere to be found. Tonight was the anniversary of the tower (?) on Garfield Street. Kaily suspected that Nancy had ditched her for dinner with Chris. So, Kaily decided to go to the cemetary by herself. It seemed like a safer place then Garfield Street tonight. On her way to the cemetary she encountered an old man who asked her riddle after riddle before she could get inside the cemetary. Oddly, she did not question the old man&#8217;s presence, but she answered every question and soon found herself walking into the cemetary. Once inside she saw Nancy scared as a&#8230;That&#8217;s as far as we got!
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