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Comment on Team Free Write by nathan livingston

nathan livingston — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 22:29:40 +0000

I like this one the best. Amazing how people come up with such a story.

Comment on Team Free Write by nathan livingston

nathan livingston — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 22:26:13 +0000

This story is funny, it goes all diffrent directions.

Comment on Team Free Write by nathan livingston

nathan livingston — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 22:24:02 +0000

Thank goodness it was just a dream.

Comment on Team Free Write by nathan livingston

nathan livingston — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 22:21:27 +0000

Very Creative!

Comment on Class for March 11 by Garrett

Garrett — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 05:09:09 +0000

It is where all the other class documents are – in the 2020 Info section. Hope that helps.

Comment on Class for March 11 by Simpsonj

Simpsonj — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 04:49:18 +0000

i don’t know if i missing something. But i can’t find the link to get the teacher review sheet. Please help.

Comment on Team Free Write by austintechhead

austintechhead — Fri, 26 Feb 2010 01:38:43 +0000

“Would you like fries with that?” Droned the monotonous voice on the loudspeaker/ Jared was about to decline, but his answer was stopped by a big

BOOOM! The world had blown up and Jared was

still quite without his burger and shake. He decided, from under the rubble of the McDonalds ceiling, that fries would not have been a good idea anyway. It was likely that this large Hell Hound spitting in his face would have

taken off his hand. The world not what had blown up, it was the hamburger/ He had finally found the crime lord, who was hiding behind the fries and had planted the bomb in between two patties Jared’s potential meal. Jared reached in the backseat for his bazooka & began rapid firing rockets in a frenzy. When he no longer had rocket left to shoot, he started launching rubble. He continued, unsatisfied until all that was left of the crime lord’s city was ash.

Comment on Team Free Write by holloway66

holloway66 — Thu, 25 Feb 2010 01:22:50 +0000

1. The marines breached the door. They had their M16s at the ready. The shot had come from this building.
2. Quick shoot back. We are heavy fire, call in for backup before we get
3. surrounded. You go that way with alpha team and take the rear of the building. I will take bravo team and storm the front and backup will have to do their job.
4. They moved fast around the side of the building each man covering one another. Just as they approached the back door there was a whizzing that made a puff of cement in front
5. of them. “no” the sarg screamed “take cover”! Every man dodged for cover.
6. they were in a pickle snipers were set up all around them. There was a whizzing the sarg went down.

Comment on Team Free Write by John Lorz

John Lorz — Wed, 24 Feb 2010 06:05:53 +0000

Something wet hit the back of Paul’s head and he moved his hand up to feel what it was. Behind his ear was what was conceivably– a giant wet spit wad. “Gross, ” he thought as he looked behind him. His friends were ducking for cover from– the principal who had come walking around the corner.
He would get them back but now was not the time; they would pay for playing– “Screw this. I’m upset. We should go and get some serious fire power and show these knuckleheads what we are all about. No one spits at me! Don’t they know that?”–
So they ran up to the bathroom and collected all the toilet paper they could get and got it all wet and formed the largest spit wad ever! They then went down to the cafeteria.– In the bucket they carried a mess of water and TP. Sneaking up they slowly tipped the bucket–

That was the end. I guess we never get to know who they dumped the wad on.

Comment on Team Free Write by joshdee8

joshdee8 — Wed, 24 Feb 2010 00:20:15 +0000

jethro walked down the dirt path, the setting sun lay in his eyes.
this struggle continued as he attempted to rid his left hand of the bear trap.(change)
“this really hurts.” he bites off his left hand and uses it to lure out some meat that he can kill and eat. he is a surviver of a ship wreck off the coast of hawaii. he has no (change)
idea how long its been since been wandering around. now from loss of blood, he was starting to feel faint. suddenly a figute appeared from the disstant sunset. “martha?” jethro called weakly, “is that you?” the figure(change)
moved in closer and just befor jethero fanted from loss of blood he saw it wasn’t martha, it wasn’t even human as he blacked out.